A few weeks ago I told you all that I had “discovered” haiku after reading Matsuo Bashou’s masterpiece The Narrow Road to Oku. The book inspired me to try my own hand at the ancient poetic art form, though the results were often less than impressive and probably not worthy of being called haiku at all. And so to avoid the wrath of any purists who may happen to chance upon my blog, or any of my poems consisting of roughly 17 syllables, I’ve coined the term eyeku. Therefore, the rules no longer apply to my poems and me, much like the Geneva Conventions and international law don’t apply to Guantanomo Bay and its POW’s—sorry, enemy combatants.
Two days ago, on the spring equinox, I went with Tomoki to one of the biggest shrines in Fukuoka, Miyajidake shrine. It was a fine day; a strong and cool breeze tempered the warmth of the sun’s rays. The first of the cherry blossoms had begun to bloom, and bamboo poles displaying bright banners lined many of the paths that led to the shrine and the gardens and grounds surrounding it. The banners fluttered, and the poles swayed in the breeze, and somehow the two combined to produce a rather eerie sound, prompting Tomoki to comment playfully, “They’re crying.”
Miyajidake shrine was constructed in the 7th century. For me, visiting a place like this always helps to put things into perspective. Fourteen-hundred years of history: I imagine the labourers working together to put the stone steps in place; I wonder at how many people have come and gone over the centuries, at what kind of people they were—peasants, lords, travelling poets like Bashou, wandering swordsmen, regular folk, and the odd curious gaijin or two like me. I wonder at what kind of historical events have taken place there; and then I think of how it has only been about 220 years since Captain Cook and the First Fleet sailed into Botany Bay, to claim that vast expanse of Terra Nullius, which of course we now know as Australia. In the grand scheme of things, and in particular for the aborigines of Australia who have been there for tens of thousands of years, 220 years is nothing but a drop in the bucket. When I look at the state of the aboriginal people today, I can’t help but think what we are seeing is a people still deeply grieving the loss of their land, their way of life, and their independence.
The spring equinox -
At Miyajidake shrine
The bamboo poles cried
Friday, March 23, 2007
EYEKU
投稿者 Eyezaku 場所 4:57 am
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Hey did you take any photos? I think you should post one of the shirne here.
(to your 19iken post)..
somehow i'm always confusing people.. :S
i have to come back another time and read this post again, lack of time right now, but feel like commenting :)
take care~
Lach~ photos were taken, but i'll have to check with the boss (Tomoki) to see if I can post 'em.
MS~ arigatou:) take your time.
when you write about the Japanese experiences you're having, I get so envious. I can't wait to visit.
Japan, not you.......don't want to scare you and think me and Paz were going to show up on your doorstep one day :)
i know you weren't on the list but you make me think too brotha.
My brother is always putting my name in something! Grrr. Although going to Japan on a whim wouldn't be so bad would it.
Very nice
Kiyotoe~ not at all! seriously if you guys ever make it to Fukuoka i'd be happy to show you around all those places most tourists never see.
Paz~ on a whim is how i got here:)
Adam~ cheers!
Your eyeku is chilling with the thoughts of time ... the ghosts that have been... energies for you to perceive
thanks for stopping by Ann.
*back*
:)
right now, im feeling something i can't really express in words...
it's something like.. if we were to live in another's life, then we wouldn't see the world only through our own glass..but rather we'd be looking through a kaleidoscope.. (my head's spinning right now, kinda tiring day.. :P)
i don't think i'm making any sense.
:P
making sense is optional:)
if you're saying we should try to look at things from different points of view, i completely agree.
If you'd like to experience what I'm referencing, just go into my archives and start reading December 2005 - huge month in my life, the following months were the fallout...
i'll do that, Adam. thanks.
Eye, Thanks for the visit...and of course I had to come to see you too ;-)
What a beautiful post...and a great eyeku!!! lol.
Maybe I'll call mine Odatku?
Doesn't have a nice ring to it tho..hehe.
Your country is indeed blessed with so much history...It's no wonder that you felt the way you did...how great!!!
You're welcome Odat:)
Japan isn't actually my country, it's just where i live. i'm Australian.
thanks for coming over and leaving a comment:)
looking forward to your future odatku's!
I, have a blessed weekend :)
may yours be blessed also, MS:)
thanks for visiting my site :D anywyay, as soon as i get a chancce i will link your site to mine if thats kewl with you...!
that's very kewl, inh. i'll do the same for you:)
Very nice, eyechan. Even if I'm not into all of that frou-frou poetry...
-Theodore Trumblebunks, I, Esq.
have a blessed Easter, I :)
thanks Teddy! im not into frou frou poetry either. eyeku is far superior;)
you too MS!!
dear I, how is your trip going? (have you even embarked?) :)
hope you have the best trip yet of your lifetime~! if only i could tag along.. hahaha. but no, i have got other things keeping me behind.
..ah well, bon voyage, monsieur! must tell me all about it :)
haven't gone yet MS. but very soon. this Wednesday. arigato!
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